Bài viết sau, cô Đinh Thảo Chi sẽ hướng dẫn bạn làm bài Writing Task 1 chủ đề The percentage of male and female students who achieved high grades. Bài viết sẽ giúp bạn triển khai ý tưởng một cách chặt chẽ, khoa học và logic hơn.
1. Phân tích và hướng dẫn
1.1. Đề bài
The four bar charts compare the percentage of male and female students who achieved high grades (A and B) in five subjects at Parston School and the national average. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
(Bốn biểu đồ cột dưới đây so sánh tỷ lệ phần trăm học sinh nam và nữ đạt điểm cao (điểm A và B) ở năm môn học tại trường Parston và mức trung bình toàn quốc. Hãy tóm tắt thông tin bằng cách chọn lọc, báo cáo các đặc điểm chính và thực hiện so sánh ở những nơi phù hợp.)
1.2. Phân tích đề bài
Dạng bài: Bar charts
Phân tích bài:
- Parston School outperformed the national average in every subject for both genders.
- Math and Science recorded the highest percentages among male students at both Parston School and the national level.
- Arts had the lowest proportion of high-achieving students in almost every group.
- Female students generally performed more evenly across subjects, whereas male students showed larger differences between subjects.
- Female students outperformed males in Humanities, Arts and Languages, while male students achieved higher results in Math and Science.
- The performance gap between Parston School and the national average was particularly noticeable in Math and Science.
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1.3. Dàn bài chi tiết
Intro: Paraphrase đề bài.
The four bar charts compare the percentages of male and female students who obtained grades A and B in five subjects at Parston School and across the national average.
Overview: Summarise the main features.
- Overall, students at Parston School achieved higher percentages than the national average in every subject.
- Math and Science were the strongest subjects for males, whereas female performance was more balanced across the five subjects.
- Arts recorded the lowest percentages in most categories.
Body Paragraph 1: Describe the two charts for Parston School.
- Male students
- Math: about 45% (highest).
- Science: about 42%.
- Humanities: about 30%.
- Languages: about 28%.
- Arts: about 22% (lowest).
- Female students
- Math: about 40%.
- Science: about 38%.
- Humanities: about 35%.
- Languages: about 33%.
- Arts: about 30% (lowest).
- Compare males and females:
- Males performed better in Math and Science.
- Females achieved higher percentages in Humanities, Arts and Languages.
Body Paragraph 2: Describe the national average and compare with Parston School.
- Male students
- Math: about 35%.
- Science: about 33%.
- Humanities: about 28%.
- Languages: about 25%.
- Arts: about 20%.
- Female students
- Math: about 32%.
- Humanities: about 31%.
- Science: about 30%.
- Languages: about 29%.
- Arts: about 27%.
- In every subject, Parston School recorded higher figures than the national average.
- The largest differences were seen in Math and Science.
2. Bài mẫu
The four bar charts compare the percentages of male and female students who achieved grades A and B in five subjects at Parston School and across the national average.
Overall, Parston School recorded higher proportions of high-achieving students than the national average in every subject for both genders. In addition, Mathematics and Science were the strongest subjects for male students, whereas female students performed more consistently across all five subjects. Arts was the least successful subject in almost every category.
At Parston School, Mathematics was the best-performing subject among male students, with approximately 45% achieving high grades, followed closely by Science at around 42%. The figures then fell to 30% for Humanities, 28% for Languages and only about 22% for Arts. Female students showed a more balanced pattern, recording around 40% in Mathematics, 38% in Science and 35% in Humanities. Their results in Languages and Arts were approximately 33% and 30%, respectively. Compared with males, females achieved higher percentages in Humanities, Arts and Languages, while males performed better in Mathematics and Science.
A similar pattern can be seen in the national averages, although the percentages were consistently lower. Among male students, Mathematics and Science remained the top subjects at approximately 35% and 33%, while Arts recorded the lowest figure at about 20%. For female students, Mathematics ranked first at around 32%, followed closely by Humanities and Science at roughly 31% and 30%, respectively. Overall, the performance gap between Parston School and the national average was most noticeable in Mathematics and Science.
Sample by Dinh Thao Chi – IELTS Teacher at The IELTS Workshop
3. Từ vựng
- achieve high grades: đạt điểm cao
- percentage of students: tỷ lệ học sinh
- outperform: có kết quả tốt hơn
- national average: mức trung bình toàn quốc
- record the highest proportion: ghi nhận tỷ lệ cao nhất
- perform consistently: có kết quả ổn định
- subject performance: kết quả theo môn học
- academic achievement: thành tích học tập
- considerably higher: cao hơn đáng kể
- by comparison: so sánh thì
- the strongest subject: môn học có kết quả tốt nhất
- the weakest subject: môn học có kết quả thấp nhất
- a similar pattern can be observed: có thể quan sát thấy xu hướng tương tự
- exceed the national average: vượt mức trung bình toàn quốc
- performance gap: khoảng cách về thành tích
Tạm kết
Hy vọng rằng sau khi tham khảo bài mẫu chủ đề Male and female students who achieved high grades trên học viên sẽ hiểu rõ hơn cách triển khai và hoàn thiện một bài IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Bar Chart một cách đầy đủ.
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