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1. Phân tích đề bài
1.1. Đề bài
Many doctors recommend that older people should get regular exercise, but most patients do not follow this advice. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve the problem?
(Nhiều bác sĩ khuyến nghị rằng người lớn tuổi nên tập thể dục thường xuyên, nhưng hầu hết bệnh nhân lại không làm theo lời khuyên này. Tại sao lại như vậy? Có thể làm gì để giải quyết vấn đề này?)
1.2. Phân tích đề bài
- Dạng bài: Cause and Solution
- Topic: Older people stop exercising
- Keywords: Older people; exercise; patients; reasons; solutions
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1.3. Dàn bài chi tiết
- Introduction:
- Paraphrase the topic
- Directive Statement
- Body Paragraph:
- Body 1: Cause Paragraph
- Old people are prone to serious health issues
- Ageism / Fear of elderly insurance
- Body 2: Solutions Paragraph
- Doctors recommend nutritional diets
- The government working with the medical community to build lifestyle improvement centers for old people
- Body 1: Cause Paragraph
- Conclusion
2. Bài mẫu
It is suggested by numerous medical experts that the elderly remain physically active. However, the majority do not take heed of this advice. This essay aims to provide causes to the phenomenon, and offer methods to tackle the problem.
There are direct and underlying factors that influence the elderly’s reluctance to commit to physical exercise. For one, it can be seen that old people do not have a good constitution and well-being, compared to younger age ranges. Due to inevitable senescence, health issues are found to occur more frequently and leave behind more damaging impacts on older individuals. This is the reason why they feel hesitant to take up exercising, as a few mistakes can tremendously affect their body in indescribable ways. Official health research documents claim that old people are more prone to exercise-related accidents, often resulting in higher mortality rates, which further frightens them from regular exercises. Additionally, ageism might be an indirect factor. Areas that promote physical exercise such as gymnasiums, training studios, and sports centers, are found to cater more to adolescents and adults, housing equipment that is not user-friendly to the elderly. Adding aforementioned health issues and lack of guarantee or insurance from training areas, they are generally discouraged from participating in heavy physical exercises; furthermore, with no elderly-centric places to work out, they are not incentivized to take up exercising. For example, numerous gymnasiums tend to steer physical trainers away from helping older individuals due to their fragility, and instead, focusing on younger individuals to undergo training. As a result of this focus on youth, old people might perceive themselves to be physically and socially disincentivized to exercise regularly.
There are several solutions that can tackle this problem. To begin with, doctors can recommend nutritious diets that can accompany exercises. After frequent doctor visits are generally common for old people, geriatricians should be cognizant of their patients’ conditions, constitutional limitations, and dietary needs; thus, they can offer the types of exercises and the type of nutrient that older people can have. This is something that more hospitals are actively developing, which will help the elderly to improve their later life. Another solution can be found in the government, in cooperation with the medical community, encouraging the establishment of physical training centers that specifically cater to geriatrics. Different from physical therapy centers or nursing homes, this will be more similar to gymnasiums that hire health professionals and physical trainers to focus on maintaining and improving the well-being of older individuals. Those with prior health conditions will be assessed with due process; however, older people with normal health are allowed to join, and take up regular exercises with the help of capable trainers.
In summary, limited constitution and perceived ignorance from physical training centers serve as deterrence for old people who want to exercise regularly. To combat this issue, it is recommended that doctors become aware of their needs, and the government provides an encouraging physical training environment that caters to what they want.
Sample by Pham Duy Anh – IELTS Teacher at The IELTS Workshop
3. Từ vựng (Vocabulary)
- take heed of: chú ý/lắng nghe và làm theo
- reluctance to commit to: sự miễn cưỡng trong việc cam kết/thực hiện
- senescence: quá trình lão hóa
- prone to: dễ có xu hướng/mắc phải
- ageism: sự phân biệt đối xử dựa trên tuổi tác
- incentivized to: được khuyến khích/tạo động lực để làm gì
- disincentivized to: bị làm mất động lực để làm gì
- cognizant of: nhận thức rõ về
- establishment of: sự thành lập/thiết lập
- deterrence: sự ngăn cản/rào cản
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