Trong chuyên mục Giải đề IELTS Writing Task 2 tuần này, bạn sẽ cùng thầy Minh Tiến từ The IELTS Workshop khám phá cách xử lý đề bài về chủ đề Wealth and Helping Others trong IELTS Writing Task 2 nhé.
1. Phân tích đề bài
1.1. Đề bài Wealth and Helping Others
Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?
(Một số người tin rằng giá trị lớn nhất của sự giàu có là nó cho phép một người có cơ hội hỗ trợ và giúp đỡ người khác. Bạn đồng ý hay không đồng ý với ý kiến này?)
1.2. Phân tích đề bài
Dạng bài: opinion
Keywords:
- being rich
- the most important thing
- opportunity to help others
Brainstorm: Bài viết theo quan điểm Disagree
- Main idea 1:
- Wealth provides financial security
- People can:
- meet basic needs
- avoid stress
- Main idea 2:
- Wealth gives freedom & autonomy
- Choose career, lifestyle
- Main idea 3:
- Helping others is not only for the rich
- Poor people still help (time, effort, kindness)
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1.3. Dàn bài chi tiết
Introduction
- Rephrase the question
- Clearly state a disagreement with the view
Body Paragraph 1
- Topic sentence: Being wealthy enables individuals to provide assistance to others.
- Main ideas:
- Charitable giving
- Philanthropic activities
- Positive contributions to society
- Support:
- Examples such as funding scholarships and offering aid after natural disasters
- Mini conclusion:
- → Although this benefit is significant, it is not the greatest advantage of wealth.
Body Paragraph 2 (Main Argument)
- Topic sentence: The most valuable aspect of wealth is the financial stability it provides.
- Main ideas:
- Freedom from worries about basic necessities
- Improved overall standard of living
- Support:
- Access to better healthcare and educational opportunities
Body Paragraph 3 (Optional)
- Topic sentence: The ability to help others is not determined by financial status.
- Main ideas: Compassion and generosity can be found among people of all income levels.
- Support: Volunteering time and effort to support others
Conclusion
- Restate the main position
- Reinforce that financial security is more important than the opportunity to help others
2. Bài mẫu
The role of wealth in modern society has sparked ongoing debate, particularly regarding whether its greatest value lies in enabling individuals to help others. While it is true that financial resources can facilitate acts of generosity, I do not believe this is the most important aspect of being rich. Instead, wealth primarily provides financial security and freedom and autonomy, which are more fundamental benefits.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people argue that being wealthy allows individuals to make meaningful contributions to society. With sufficient financial resources, people can donate to charities, support disadvantaged communities, or fund essential services such as education and healthcare. For instance, many affluent individuals establish foundations that provide scholarships or disaster relief, thereby improving the lives of countless people. In this sense, wealth can indeed serve as a powerful tool for social good.
However, the most significant advantage of being rich is the financial security it brings. Wealth enables individuals to meet their basic needs without constant concern about expenses, which greatly reduces stress and helps improve well-being. Moreover, financial stability allows people to access better healthcare, education, and living conditions, all of which contribute to a higher quality of life. Without such a foundation, even the intention to help others may be difficult to realize.
Furthermore, it is important to recognize that helping others is not exclusive to the wealthy. Many individuals with limited financial means still contribute to society through volunteering, emotional support, or small acts of kindness. This suggests that generosity is more closely linked to personal values than to financial status.
In conclusion, although wealth undoubtedly creates opportunities to assist others, I believe its most important function is to provide security and freedom. These fundamental benefits ultimately shape an individual’s ability to live a stable and fulfilling life.
Sample 7.5 by Truong Minh Tien– IELTS Teacher at The IELTS Workshop
3. Từ vựng (Vocabulary)
- financial security: sự ổn định tài chính
- freedom and autonomy: tự do và quyền tự chủ
- acts of generosity: hành động hào phóng
- disadvantaged communities: cộng đồng khó khăn
- improve well-being: cải thiện chất lượng sống
- a powerful tool for social good: công cụ tạo giá trị xã hội
- fundamental benefit: lợi ích cốt lõi
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Useful structures
- It is understandable why + S + V
→ It is understandable why some people argue that…
- With + N, S + can + V
→ With sufficient financial resources, people can…
- Without + N, S + may + V
→ Without financial stability, individuals may struggle…
- Not only … but also …
→ Wealth provides not only security but also freedom
- Although + clause, S + V
→ Although wealth enables generosity, it is not the most important aspect
Tạm kết
Hy vọng bài viết từ thầy Minh Tiến đã giúp bạn hình dung rõ cách triển khai ý cho bài IELTS Writing Task 2 dạng Opinion essay chủ đề Wealth and Helping Others một cách chặt chẽ và thuyết phục.
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